Preface

Cyrus and the return of Saturos and Menardi
Posted originally on the SquidgeWorld Archive at http://squidgeworld.org/works/60039.

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Fandoms:
Golden Sun, Stargate [TV & Movie Franchise], Stargate TV Series, Fighting Fantasy - Steve Jackson & Ian Livingstone [Roleplaying Game], Space Assassin [Roleplaying Game]
Relationships:
Original Female Character(s) & Original Female Character(s), Ivan & Robin | Isaac [Golden Sun], Gerald | Garet & Robin | Isaac [Golden Sun], Mary | Mia & Robin | Isaac [Golden Sun], Mary | Mia [Golden Sun] & Original Character(s), Gerald | Garet [Golden Sun]/Original Female Character(s), Gerald | Garet & Ivan & Mary | Mia & Robin | Isaac [Golden Sun], Garcia | Felix & Sheba [Golden Sun], Garcia | Felix & Picard | Piers [Golden Sun], Garcia | Felix & Jasmine | Jenna & Picard | Piers & Sheba [Golden Sun], Garcia | Felix & Jasmine | Jenna [Golden Sun], Alex [Golden Sun]/Original Female Character(s), Saturos [Golden Sun]/Original Female Character(s), Gerald | Garet [Golden Sun]/Mya [OC], Mary | Mia [Golden Sun] & Mya [OC], Alex [Golden Sun]/Mya [OC], Saturos [Golden Sun]/Mya [OC]
Characters:
Mary | Mia [Golden Sun], Robin | Isaac, Garcia | Felix, Jasmine | Jenna, Picard | Piers, Gerald | Garet, Original Female Character(s), Mya [Golden Sun OC], Corona | Mya's Daughter [Golden Sun OC], Menardi [Golden Sun], Esther [Space Assassin OC], Sheba [Golden Sun], Ivan [Golden Sun], Alex [Golden Sun], Saturos [Golden Sun], Cyrus [Space Assassin]
Additional Tags:
Sequel, Science Fiction, Stargate - Freeform, Fantasy, Mad Scientists, Fighting Fantasy References, Magic, Mary Sue, Self-Insert, Juvenilia, Friendship, Happy Ending, Dialogue Heavy, Screenplay/Script Format, Action/Adventure, Battle, Fights, Mya [OC] is OP, Corona is Mya and Garet Daughter, Early Work, Ambiguous/Open Ending, Temporary Character Death, Spacesuits, POV Third Person Limited, Word count: Over 1.000, Rare Fandoms, Cross-Posted from AO3, Betaed - No, Word count: 1.000 - 5.000, Translation, Translated from French, Autistic Author
Language:
English
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Published: 2004-03-07 Words: 2,908 Chapters: 8/8

Cyrus and the return of Saturos and Menardi

Summary

A Golden Sun fanfic I wrote in 2004 as a teenager on the Golden Sun Bazar French site under the pseudonym Water Seer. I was able to recover it thanks to Wayback Machine. A story where there's an obvious Self-Insert and Mary Sue in the character of Mya.

Months after Ivan, Sheba and Corona's quest against the Wind Sorcerer, Saturos and Menardi are back from the dead thanks to Cyrus, an evil tyrant. Mya, Corona, Garet and Piers must stop him after taking the Stargate.

Introduction.

Jenna, Sheba and Mia are in the Vaweken, Cyrus's spaceship.

Jenna: Don't forget our mission. Find Cyrus and kill him.

Sheba: No problem!

Mia: We also don't want our Suits to give out.

But that didn't turn out to be the case. Jenna died when she was sucked into a black hole, and Mia and Sheba were captured and turned into mutants!

Three days after this incident, Piers, Felix, Isaac and Ivan are in the Vaweken.

Isaac: Be careful, Felix. Your light will soon turn red.

Felix: Yes, I know. I'll be careful.

Piers: You know how great these Sensory Spacesuits are? They absorb all our blows!

Isaac: Yes, but what if they run out of energy? You'll be the one absorbing the hit!

Piers: HEY!

Ivan: Oh, my...!

Felix: This is no time to argue! There's a robot right in front of us!

Isaac: It's a guard. We can't let him see us, otherwise...! OH NO, FELIX! IVAN!

Felix and Ivan were taken away by the guard!

Isaac: You won't get far! STONE SPIRE!

A black hole appears at the same time.

Piers: Watch out, Isaac!

Isaac was sucked into the black hole!

"NOOOOOO! thought Piers. And to think we were almost there...! This adventure can't end like this!" Suddenly, he saw mutants that looked like... "NOOOOOOOOO! MIA! SHEBA! You've failed! Just like me and the others! No... I must... save myself!" He ran away as an evil laugh was heard.

In Cyrus' office...

Cyrus: I was right to bring you back to life. Your information was very useful.

Menardi: Oh, thank you so much!

Saturos: But we owe you that much... In any case, we're dreaming of getting rid of them!

Chapter 1: Piers returns and the adventure begins for Mya, Corona, Garet and Piers!

Corona, Mya and Garet stand in front of the Stargate.

Garet: I'm worried. Isaac, Ivan, Mia, Felix, Jenna, Sheba and Piers are long gone. I'm afraid they're dead!

Corona: Father, that will never happen!

The Stargate opens and Piers steps out.

Mya: PIERS!?

Piers: They... Isaac,... Ivan,... Mia,... Jenna,... Felix and Sheba... They're all dead!

Garet and his daughter: WHAT!!!!

Mya: Who dared to do this!

Piers: Cy-rus!

He dies.

Mya: Cyrus? REVIVE!

Piers resurrect!

Corona: Who is Cyrus?

Piers: He's an evil tyrant. He threatens planets in an unknown system. Many Assassins have tried to stop him, without success.

Garet: Now it's up to us!

Corona: And we'll do it together!

Piers: I'll come with you. You'll have a lot to learn.

He taps the Combination and the Stargate opens. Piers go in, followed by Garet, Corona and Mya.

Chapter 2: Sensory Spacesuit from Cyrus for... Mya!? And a little lesson on Spacesuits.

They find themselves on a plain, near a village.

Corona: What on earth is that?

Piers: It's Cyrus's spaceship. He's going to attack the village with a laser beam!

Mya: Not if I stop him!

She teleports and appears below the ship.

Mya: CYRUS, I KNOW YOU'RE IN THERE! AND YOU'LL NEVER WIN!!!!!

In the spaceship...

Cyrus: Do you know her?

Menardi: No. We've never dealt with her before.

Saturos: Well, I like her...

Menardi: What? Are you saying you're in love with her!

Saturos: No, I'm not! Not at all!

Cyrus : I like her too.

Saturos glares at him. "He's not going to steal her from me! he thought." Cyrus was also thinking the same thing.

Mya stays where she is.

Mya: I WILL NOT MOVE FROM HERE!

Menardi: THEN WE'LL SHOOT YOU! Cyrus, I'm going to prepare the laser!

"She mustn't die! (He looks at his high-tech Sensory Spacesuit that makes him invincible.) All I have to do is give it to her!"

A Spacesuit falls from the ship. Mya picks it up. It's blue with a yellow light on the chest and a screen on the right arm. On the screen is a three-colored bar: blue, green and red. At the top of the bar, it says "Energy." "This Spacesuit should absorb blows, I think?" She puts it on. The Suit covers every part of her body except her head and neck.

Immediately, the laser falls on her!

Garet (seeing the show): NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Mya, who is in the laser, waits for the pain. But there's no pain. "That confirms it. This Suit absorbs damage!" She saw that its Energy bar was decreasing and that its light was flashing. "That's it! Every blow absorbs energy, and when it's gone, you feel it! I haven't lost much, there's still some blue left on the bar." The laser is gone.

In the spaceship...

Menardi: That's it! She's dead!

Saturos: ...

Cyrus: ...No, she's still alive.

Menardi: How!!!

The ship leaves and Garet, Corona and Piers join Mya.

Piers: Where did you get that Sensory Spacesuit?

Garet and Corona: Sensory Spacesuit!?

Piers (pointing to his, which is blue color): Like the one I'm wearing. These Suits absorb blows. But when they run out of energy, they absorb no more.

Garet: Why do you need it?

Piers: The blows we take here are far more powerful and dangerous than those we take in your world in a fight. That's why we all must have one!

Corona: In that case, let's go and buy some!

Piers go to a store to renew his Energy and Corona and Garet buys one (green color).

Piers: See that light on your chest? Every time you're touched, it flashes. Right now it's blue, a sign that you're full of Energy. It goes from blue to green and from green to red. If it ever turns red, be careful, because that means you'll soon run out of Energy.

Corona: I understand.

Mya: But in my case? My light is yellow. It's my Suit that's blue. And my energy bar is here.

Piers will look at the bar.

Piers: In that case, your whole Suit will change color, but... AHHHHHHHH! THAT'S ALL YOU LOST WHEN THE LASER HIT YOU!!! Normally, you'd lose half of the whole thing! This Spacesuit is without doubt the best there is. Where did you find it?

Mya: It fell off Cyrus's spaceship.

Piers: Huh? Why would Cyrus send you one?

Mya: I don't know.

At the same time a woman arrives.

Esther: Piers, you are there! RETURN TO THE MISSION IMMEDIATELY!

Piers: Uh… yes.

Esther: AND YOU TOO!

Piers and the others quickly leave the store.

Garet: Who was that!

Piers: This is Esther, the Assassins' leader. She is strict but you have to obey her. Follow me! We're going to take a spaceship that will take us to the Vaweken.

They get on a spaceship and they go above the Vaweken. They jump from the spaceship and land on top of the Vaweken.

Garet: Hey, is that a trap door?

Piers: No, it's a hatch.

Mya: I open it.

She opened it and saw metal bars.

Garet (who sees these bars): It forms a ladder.

Piers: Let's go down.

Chapter 3: The black spheres.

Our heroes descend the ladder.

Corona: We are in the Vaweken.

Garet: Now our mission can begin!

Piers: Follow me, I'll guide you!

Garet, Mya and Corona follow Piers. After several minutes of walking, they saw a door. But there are black spheres near this same door.

Piers: We have to walk past without trying to avoid them if they approach us.

Piers, to set an example, approaches the spheres. They stand in front of him, but he moves forward anyway. They move out of the way and he goes to the door.

Piers: See?

Corona: Oh!

She with Mya and Garet did the same thing. Piers open the door and they continue moving.

Chapter 4: Felix!!!

After more walking and fighting robot guards...

Corona: Here. That door. Piers, do you know what's on the other side?

Piers: No, I don't...

Mya: I'll go and see.

Corona: Me too. Cover us!

While Garet and Piers cover them, the girls go to the door. They open it and enter the room.

Corona: It's horrible! It looks like Frankenstein's lab!

Mya: It is.

(How do they know about Frankenstein?) Corona began to explore through the shelves filled with jars of human organs. Suddenly, she saw a repulsive creature strapped to an operating table.

Corona: MYA! Come and see this!

Mya: WHAT? (She saw the creature.) OH! (She approached the creature and when she saw its eyes, she understood that it wasn't a creature in reality but...) FELIX!!! WHAT HAVE THEY DONE?!

Corona: Felix?

Felix grunted. He began to struggle and freed himself from the ties that bound him to the table. He moves towards them.

Corona: He doesn't look happy...

Mya: Felix, don't attack us! We're your friends! FELIX!!!

He stops moving.

Mya: Felix…

Her words then become choppy.

Corona: Mom, what are you saying? I don't understand a word!

Mya continues her incomprehensible dialogue.

Corona: What are you saying to him!

Mya: Shh! I'm using The Clan language. He seems to understand it! I'm trying to communicate with him! To tell him we were friends!

Corona: Oh, okay! I'll leave that to you.

She looks at her mother, who is trying to make Felix understand that they used to be friends. After a few minutes, Mya tells Corona that he has now (re)become an ally for the fight against Cyrus!

Corona: That's great, Felix! But will you ever be normal again?

Mya translates for him and...

Felix (translated by Mya, who partly understands): I... don't know. But I think I'll go back to normal when Cyrus is beaten.

Piers and Garet arrive at the same moment.

Piers: Stand back, girls!

Garet: We'll slaughter him!

Corona: Don't hurt him! It's Felix!

Piers: My God... Felix...

Chapter 5: Revolt and battle against Menardi.

Meanwhile...

Menardi: Cyrus, I have the impression that those Adepts are in the spaceship.

Cyrus: So what?

Menardi: So let me go kill them!

Saturos (thinking of Mya): I don't think that's a good idea...

Cyrus (thinking Mya had enough stamina to beat her): Yes, very good idea indeed. Go and beat them!

In the lab...

Three more creatures enter the room.

Garet: It's... Sheba, Mia and Ivan!!! They've been turned into monsters too! But what happened to Isaac and Jenna?

Piers: Isaac... is dead. Sucked into a black hole. Jenna must have suffered the same fate.

Garet: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ISAAC!

???: HA HA HA HA HA!

Garet: Menardi!? It can't be you! YOU'RE DEAD!

Menardi: No, I'm very much alive and so is Saturos.

Corona: Menardi? Saturos?

Mya: Saturos? Menardi? Garet, you never told me about them!

Garet: That's because I thought it wasn't necessary to talk about enemies who were supposed to be dead!

Menardi (showing herself): That's too bad! But before you die, perhaps you could tell me your names?

Corona: I am Corona, daughter of Garet and Mya, his wife.

Saturos (who heard from Cyrus's office through a camera): GRRRRRRRRRRR!

Mya: And I'm Mya, wife of Garet and All Adept!

Menardi : All Adept?

Mya: I have the Alchemy!

Menardi and Saturos: !!!

Piers: Enough talk! TO BATT...!

He didn't have time to finish before Ivan, Mia and Sheba pounced on Menardi. Felix joined them after saying to Mya: "The middle... take the middle one!"

Mya: They seem to be revolting.

Menardi: FLARE STORM!

Ivan, Mia, Sheba and Felix scream in pain. Menardi attacks them again and they die.

Garet: NO!!!

Corona: ATTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK!

Mya: GEL!

Garet: FEVER!

Piers: SOUR!

Corona: FUME!

Meanwhile...

Cyrus: They fight very well... I'm impressed with their powers. Ah, I forgot you have that power too.

Saturos: Yes, I have it too.

Cyrus: That Mya... She impresses me more than the others.

Saturos (holding back from jumping on him!): Same here.

Cyrus: Since I trust you, I'll tell you my secret. I want to marry her.

Saturos (telling himself to hold back, so as not to jump on him!) : Good decision!

Cyrus: Well, they've beaten Menardi.

Saturos: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

In the lab...

Mya: We beat her!

Piers: And we avenged our friends!

Chapter 6: Fight against Saturos.

Mya, Corona, Garet and Piers set off again.

Mya: Now we've got to find Cyrus and teach him the lesson he deserves!!!

Garet: Don't get too excited! Your Suit has turned green!

Mya: So, the light in yours is green too! So are the others! And I can feel them turning red soon...

Garet: Grrr!

Mya: What?

Garet: Oh, nothing!

Two hours later...

Piers: Well? Three doors. One of them must lead to Cyrus's office.

Garet: Which one?

Mya: The middle... Felix told me to take the middle one!

Corona: The middle door?

Mya: Yes... that must be it.

Garet: Let's go then!

Corona: We can't get in at the same time! We'll go in single file. Mya will go last. Piers first.

Piers: Good!

He opens the door and enters, followed by Garet and Corona. Corona turns around.

Corona: Hey! Where's Mya? She's gone!

Piers: What!

He turns around and sees that Corona was right.

Garet (seeing Saturos): Saturos! So you were here! But where's Cyrus?

Saturos: I don't know. He left a minute ago!

Corona: But... Mya disappeared 30 seconds ago! Cyrus took her!

Saturos: THE DIRTY... I'M THE ONE WHO WANTED HER!

Garet: WHAT!!! KNOW THAT WE'RE MARRIED! AND ALEX WANTS HER TOO! YOU'RE NOT THE ONLY ONE ON THE LIST!

Saturos: And there's Cyrus... Ah, I don't care! I'm going to find him and take back what's rightfully mine!

Saturos goes to a frame. He pushes a nearby lever and the frame begins to move! It reveals a secret passage! Saturos takes it.

Corona: We're following him!

Corona and company follow him. They find themselves in a small room.

Saturos: Come on, I swore I wouldn't do anything to you.

Mya: IT'S NOT TRUE! YOU'RE LYING!

Saturos : No, I'm not lying. I could never hurt you...

Mya : YOU'RE ONLY SAYING THAT BECAUSE...

Saturos: ...I love you and it's true!

Corona (who says it softly while listening attentively with Garet and Piers): Mom...

Mya: NO! YOU DON'T LOVE ME! NOT IN THE SENSE OF TRUE LOVE! YOU SAY YOU LOVE ME BECAUSE YOU WANT THE ALCHEMY I POSSESS! THAT'S WHY YOU JUST KILLED CYRUS! SO HE WOULDN'T TAKE IT!

Garet and Piers (quietly): Great, he's dead!

Saturos: That's true, but I really love you too!

Mya: THAT'S WHAT ALEX WANTS ME TO BELIEVE! "Although it's true that he loves me... But only a little!" I WON'T BE FOOLED AGAIN, IT'S OVER!

Saturos: In that case, I'll have to use force, PYRO...

Corona throws herself in front of her mother!

Saturos: ...CLASM!

Corona: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

The light from her Suit turns red and it explodes! "No! She has no energy left! Mya says to herself." Corona dies.

Garet: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

He and Piers get in front of Mya.

Garet: WE'LL KILL YOU! FOR MY DAUGHTER!

Piers: TOGETHER!

Mya: No, wait...!

They fought like hell, but Saturos won... (He also had a Sensory Spacesuit, something Menardi didn't have! And it was filled to the max!)

Saturos: HA HA HA HA HA! I GOT YOU! NOW, NONE OF MY ENEMIES ARE ALIVE! (Seeing Mya, who remained frozen in the face of this defeat.) Come now my pretty.

Mya (who stood still, not knowing what to do): ...

Saturos: Come on. Don't make me come for you.

Mya (who didn't unfreeze, not knowing if she should or not): ...

Saturos: All right, I'll come and get you!

He was going to take Mya when...

Mya: TEMPEST!

Saturos (losing a little energy from his Suit): What are you doing!

Mya: I've finally made up my mind, I'm going to do it! I'm going to fight you to avenge my friends!

Saturos: But I...

Mya: If you really love me, you'll let me win and you won't attack me!

Saturos: I... Well, when you have to, you have to! INFERNO!

Mya's Spacesuit loses Energy but is still green.

Mya: Ah-ah! I knew you didn't really like me! MEGACOOL!

Saturos's also lost Energy. Its light goes from blue to green.

Saturos: No, you're the uncooperative one, PYROCLASM!

Mya's Suit loses energy again.

Mya: Cooperative? As if I obeyed you like a vulgar slave! I know how to make you lose the Energy left on your Spacesuit! MERCURY, SPIRIT OF WATER, COME TO MY AID! ATTACK!

Saturos received Mercury's full power. The light in his Suit turned red, faded and exploded. Immediately, the pain caused by the Spirit began to be felt inside him. A pain so immense he couldn't help screaming! As if his whole body was being torn apart! After this torture, he dies. "I've had him!" Isaac, Jenna, Ivan, Mia, Sheba and Felix appeared.

Sheba: We're... back?

Mia: Looks like it.

Jenna: What happened... did Cyrus die?

Mya: Yes.

Piers (who was resurrected with Garet and his daughter) : Saturos and Menardi too!

Ivan: That's great!

Isaac: Saturos and Menardi were back!?

Garet: Yes, I forgot that you and Jenna had been dead before knowing that...

Corona: Anyway, we're forgetting everything because they're dead!

Piers: Let's go home!

They all go home with the Stargate after leaving their Suits behind.

Epilogue.

A month goes by and all the Adepts are living the good life. Ivan had founded a dance club, Sheba a fortune-telling club... and all was going well.

But in Hell...

Saturos : Come on, Menardi! We're almost there!

Menardi: I'll join you!

He joins her and...

Saturos: That's it! We're free! And even as ghosts we'll have our revenge!

They start laughing. "Sure, our plan will work!" Menardi says to herself.

* The end of this fanfic had a sentence about a sequel called "Body Swap”, but the Wayback Machine had no further captures of Golden Sun Bazar. Thus this is THE END of Mya's adventures unless I decide to write more.

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