Preface

Mya’s Quest
Posted originally on the SquidgeWorld Archive at http://squidgeworld.org/works/60007.

Rating:
General Audiences
Archive Warning:
No Archive Warnings Apply
Category:
Gen
Fandom:
Golden Sun
Relationships:
Ivan & Robin | Isaac [Golden Sun], Gerald | Garet & Robin | Isaac [Golden Sun], Mary | Mia & Robin | Isaac [Golden Sun], Mary | Mia [Golden Sun] & Original Character(s), Gerald | Garet [Golden Sun]/Original Female Character(s), Gerald | Garet & Ivan & Mary | Mia & Robin | Isaac [Golden Sun], Garcia | Felix & Sheba [Golden Sun], Garcia | Felix & Picard | Piers [Golden Sun], Garcia | Felix & Jasmine | Jenna & Picard | Piers & Sheba [Golden Sun], Garcia | Felix & Jasmine | Jenna [Golden Sun], Alex [Golden Sun]/Original Female Character(s), Gerald | Garet [Golden Sun]/Mya [OC], Mary | Mia [Golden Sun] & Mya [OC], Alex [Golden Sun]/Mya [OC]
Characters:
Mary | Mia [Golden Sun], Robin | Isaac, Garcia | Felix, Jasmine | Jenna, Picard | Piers, Gerald | Garet, Original Female Character(s), Mya [Golden Sun OC], Original Male Character(s), Derrick [Golden Sun Vampire OC], Marc [Golden Sun Vampire OC], Lily [Golden Sun OC], Helene [Golden Sun OC], Oceane [Golden Sun Mermaid OC], Sheba [Golden Sun], Ivan [Golden Sun], Alex [Golden Sun], Original Mermaid Character(s)
Additional Tags:
Sequel, Kidnapping, Merpeople, References to Den lille Havfrue | The Little Mermaid - Hans Christian Andersen, Mary Sue, Self-Insert, Juvenilia, Friendship, Happy Ending, Dialogue Heavy, Screenplay/Script Format, Action/Adventure, Battle, Fights, Girl Power, Damsels in Distress, POV Third Person Limited, Word count: Over 1.000, Princes & Princesses, Mya [OC] is OP, Early Work, Cross-Posted from AO3, Word count: 1.000 - 5.000, Autistic Author, Supernatural - Vampires, Translation, Translated from French, Betaed - No
Language:
English
Stats:
Published: 2004-01-08 Words: 2,490 Chapters: 10/10

Mya’s Quest

Summary

A Golden Sun fanfic I wrote in 2004 as a teenager on the Golden Sun Bazar French website under the pseudonym Water Seer. I was able to recover it thanks to Wayback Machine.

The sequel to Mya, the All Adept. Mia is kidnapped by a vampire and Mya must save her in another world with a team of originals female Adepts.

I've only corrected mistakes in the (Original French) text without changing the formatting. The dialogues are like this ''Character: Dialogue'' and the thoughts are between quotation marks.

The English translation is brand new since this fic was never translated before.

Prologue.

In the home of Derrick, an evil vampire, all seemed well, but...
Derrick : What's the matter, son? Don't you feel well?
Marc : I'm bored!
Derrick : A bit of fresh blood will do you good...
Marc : No, it's not that! I want a friend!
Derrick : A friend?
Marc : Yes, a friend, a girl.
Derrick : How would you like this girl to be?
Marc : Uh... a nice girl, with whom I could tell a lot of secrets... "My strange gifts," he thought. ...kind and very pretty.
Derrick : I'll get that for you.
Derrick leaves, takes a Gate and heads for Angara. More precisely to Imil.
Mia : I can go to bed now.
Derrick appears.
Mia : AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Chapter 1: Shock Vision!

Mya was living the good life at Vale with Garet and had also discovered her true family: Lord Hammet and Lady Layana! She is Princess Adimya! It had been a shock, but now she felt better. Especially since Ivan, Piers and Sheba had decided to stay at Vale. However, one day...
Mya : Garet…
Garet : Yes.
Mya : I miss Mia. It's been a long time since we've seen each other.
Garet : That's true.
Mya : We haven't heard from her, which I find odd... AH!
She had a vision. "But... it's Mia! She's being kidnapped by a vampire!!!"
Mya : Garet, Mia has been kidnapped by a vampire!!!!
Garet : What!!! You're telling me nonsense!
Mya : No, I saw her... in a vision. Just ask Ivan to use Mind Read on me and you'll see!
Garet : Okay... IVAN!
Ivan (arriving) : Yes.
Mya : Probe my mind.
Ivan : Uh... okay. Mind Read! (Five seconds later.) AH!
Garet : What, Ivan?
Ivan : Mia's been kidnapped!
Garet : !
Mya : Told you!
Isaac (Who arrives with Felix, Piers, Jenna and Sheba.) : What's going on?
Ivan : Mia has been kidnapped!
Isaac, Felix, Piers, Jenna and Sheba : WHAT!!!

Meanwhile...
Mia : You're going to let me go, right! Where are you taking me!
Derrick : At home.
Mia : To kill me, that's it!
Derrick : No, for another reason.
Back home, Derrick takes Mia to a cell and locks her in.
Mia : LET ME OUT OF HERE! OR YOU'LL GET A TASTE OF MY PSYNERGY!
Mark (who was close by and had heard) : Psynergy?
Derrick : Marc, you're here! Your friend is right here in this cell.
Marc : Thank you so much! You can go now.
Derrick leaves.
Mia : LET ME OUT OF HERE!!!
Marc : I'll let you out when you tell me what Psynergy is.
Mia : Very well, Psynergy is...

Chapter 2: The Gate.

Jenna : We have to save Mia!
Sheba : But how? We don't even know where he took her.
Mya : There's a rumor going around that there's a Gate to the Other World. Perhaps it exists?
Isaac : In that case, we must look for it!
Ivan : Let's go!
Isaac, Garet, Ivan and Mya move away.
Jenna : What about us?
Mya : It would be better if you didn't come. It might be dangerous.
Felix : She's right. We'll stay.
Mya, Isaac, Garet and Ivan leave Vale and Felix and Piers return to their homes.
Jenna : Sheba... we're following them!
Sheba : In secret?
Jenna : Yes, I want to go on an adventure!
Sheba : Me too, let's go!
Sheba and Jenna catch up and follow them. They arrive at Kalay and the Gate appears. It's a large, liquid-looking window.
Jenna : All right! That's the Gate!
Isaac : What are you doing here!!!
Sheba : Uh, well...
The Thieves (the ones who stole Ivan's Shaman's Rod) arrive.
Leader : Oh no! No way!!!
Thief 1 : And to think we'd just escaped from prison...
Thief 2 : Come on, let's beat them again!
Isaac : You're forgetting one detail...
Thief 1 : Which one?
Everyone : WE ARE ADEPTS!!!
Thief 2 : Oh no!
Isaac, Garet, Ivan, Jenna and Sheba pounced on them to fight and Alex appeared.
Alex: Mya jump!!!
Mya jumps into the Gate and it closes. After beating them...
Sheba : Oh no, the Gate has closed!
Garet : NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Jenna : But Mya jumped in! She can save Mia!
Isaac : That's her quest. Mia's fate is in her hands. Let her succeed...
Alex : Don't worry. She'll succeed.
Jenna : Alex! What are you doing here?
Alex : I came to save Mia... and I knew the Gate was going to close so I told Mya to jump.
Ivan : Thanks to you, she has a chance of being saved, and all we can do is go back to Vale.
Isaac : Let's go.
Isaac. Garet, Ivan, Jenna and Sheba return to Vale. Alex disappears.

Meanwhile at Derrick's castle...
Marc : So Psynergy is the power to create through thought? And your friends have this power?
Mia : Yes.
Marc : So I've got it. I can make fire.
Mia : Then you're a Fire Adept.
Marc : ...yes, I think so...
Mia : I'm a Water Adept and my name is Mia.
Marc : Does that mean you control water?
Mia : Yes.
Marc : So the term Adept means one who has Psynergy.
Mia : Yes, now will you let me go? You promised!
Marc : I wanted you to stay here forever as my friend, but... I think you have others who need you... after all, you saved the world! I only ask one favor. Teach me to master my gift.
Mia : All right.

Chapter 3: Lily.

Mya finds herself in front of a village. It's dark. So she goes to the Inn.
The innkeeper : It costs 30 Coins for one night.
Mya : There you go.
Mya was heading for her room when... "Trying to probe my mind? All right, you're going to sweat!" She focuses and heard someone sweating. She turned around and saw a little girl, about 10 years old, dressed in yellow.
Lily : It's okay... I'll stop...
Mya : You must have spent a lot of HP.
Lily : Yes... My name is Lily and I'm a Wind Adept.
Mya : My name is Mya and I'm also an Adept.
Lily : That explains everything...
Mya : Are you staying at the Inn?
Lily : No. But... you're not from this world, are you? I can feel it.
Mia : Yes. I have to rescue a friend who's been kidnapped.
Lily : Then I'll help you!
Lily joins her Party.
Lily : Did you know that Helene's gang is running around here?
Mya : Helene?
Lily : An unscrupulous thief! She wouldn't hesitate to steal all your equipment! Especially here...
Mya : Don't worry. If she comes, I'll beat her.
Lily : Yes. Then I'll pay.
Lily will pay and they go to bed. Mya wakes up in the middle of the night. "I'd better stay awake," she says to herself. "Just in case."
Several hours go by and... "Huh? That sounds like... footsteps!"
Mya (shaking her): Lily, wake up! Lily!
Lily: Mmmmmm...
Mya: You have to get up! Helene is coming!

Chapter 4: Helene.

Lily : Helene!!! (She looks around.) She's not here...
Mya : I can feel her coming. Let's pretend to be asleep.
Lily and Mya pretend to be asleep, and just as Helene (dressed in red) enters with three Thieves, they leap to their feet.
Lily : We're going to beat you!
Thief 1 : You think so?
Thief 2 : You're dealing with Helene...
Thief 3 : ...and she's going to steal everything!
Mya : You've got it all wrong. We're going to win and you're not going to steal anything from us!
The fight begins.
Mya : MEGACOOL!
Thief 1 : OUCH!
Thief 3 : What's that!!
"It's... could it be...!!!" thought Helene.
Lily : RAY!
"Yes! That's what it is!"
Mya : INFER…!
Helene : STOP!!!
Thief 2: What!!! Helene, what...
Helene: This gift. You... you have it?
Lily: You mean...
Mya : ...Psynergy? Psychic Energy?
Hélène : Psynergy... Yes, that's it... Psynergy...
Thief 1 : Helene?
Helene (speaking to herself): Ever since I was a little girl, I've had to steal to survive. I'd been abandoned. I discovered this gift and... there are others who have it. It's... a Fate's Sign. I join you!!!
Thief 3 : What!!!
Helene joins Mya's Party.
Thief 2 : No way!!!
Helene : Sorry guys, but my decision is made!
Thief 1 : You asked for it! Let's fight!
Helene : Very well, FLARE!
Lily : WHIRLWIND!
Mya: What level are you, Lily?
Lily and Helene : 5.
Mya : Me... I think I'm at 50... or maybe more. I have 5k HP.
The three thieves: 5k HP!!! We don't stand a chance. Let's run!
The Thieves flee.
Lily: Helene... do you really want to follow us? And not steal from us?
Helene : Follow you. I knew there was more to my life than stealing. Your quest?
Lily: This is her quest, because we're in her Party.
Mya: My name is Mya and one of my friends has been kidnapped.
Helene: A classic. By whom?
Mya: A vampire.
Lily : Please don't let it be Derrick!
Mya : Why?
Helene: He's the demon of our world and... sorry, I'm not helping.
Lily: Me too.
Mya: Hey! If nobody beats him, he'll always be there! Don't you dream of him dying?
Lily : Y-yes b-but...
Mya : Don't you dream of being the heroines who defeated him?
Helene : Yes...
Mya : Then follow me!
Helene and Lily : Uh... Yes, we have no choice!!!
The girls go to bed. The next day, they leave the Inn (Helene must have climbed out of a window!) and they leave Pia (the village).

Chapter 5: The trap.

Helene : Here we are in front of the Ocean. We must take a boat to cross it.
Lily : Here it is!
Mya : Let's go!
They're going to the boat. There...
Helene : Aren't you going to ask for a ticket?
A sailor : No. We're not coming back anyway!
Mya : What do you mean?
Sailor : You'll see.
They board the boat. The crossing was going well when suddenly...
Helene: The crew turns into zombies!!!
Mya : "You'll see." I should have known, it's a trap!
Lily : We're going to become zombies!!!

Meanwhile...
Derrick (looking into a magic mirror thinking his plan was brilliant) : You're going to die... and my son will have his female friend forever!!!!

On the boat...
Helene : FLARE! Not powerful enough!
Mya : Your powers aren't developed enough. I'll have to take care of them myself.
Lily : But there are fifteen zombies, you'll never last!
Mya : I have to! For Mia, PYROCLASM!
Helene : It's devastating...
Lily : But that's not enough... Hey Mya! You're an Adept of...
Mya : …All.
Helene : You have all the Psynergies!!!
Mya : Correct. FLARE STORM!
CRACK!!!
Lily : Oh no…
Helene : The boat is sinking!!!
"I did it," Derrick said to himself (as he continues to watch them).
The boat sinks and the three Adepts sink into the ocean.
"We're going to die! thought Mya. No Adept can breathe underwater! But... I'm breathing! I'm saved!!! But... the others... are going to drown!!!"
??? : "Maybe not."

Chapter 6: Oceane.

Mya : "Who said that? Who spoke into my mind?"
??? : "Me."
Mya turned around and saw a mermaid. But this one didn't look like a monster at all, but a blue-haired beauty.
??? : "My name is Oceane and I'm going to save your friends."
Lily and Helene find themselves in a magical bubble. They can breathe underwater!
Lily : "Are we alive?"
Helene : "Yes. And it's thanks to..."
Mya : "...Oceane."
Oceane : "It's nothing. Derrick set a trap for you..."
Lily : "How did you know? Do you know Derrick?"
Oceane : "Yes he's caused nothing but trouble and if I wasn't a mermaid I'd go and beat him!"
Helene : "But you can. This is our quest."
Lily : "No, her quest."
Mya : "Lily! You're part of my Party, so this is your quest, you and Helene's."
Lily : "Right, sorry Mya."
Oceane : "If you insist, I'll join you... long enough to cross the Ocean."
Lily : "Great!!!"
Oceane joins Mya's Party and they cross the ocean.

Meanwhile...
Marc : Well, you've learned everything so I'm setting you free, but... my father has the keys!!!!
Mia : You're going to have to steal them!!!
Marc : All right!

Chapter 7: Oceane joins Mya's Party and failed theft.

Oceane : "That's it. That's the end of the Ocean."
Mya : "Thanks for the ride."
Mya and her Party return to the surface. They saw a black island. In the middle is a black mountain and at the top is a castle.
Mya : It's Derrick's castle!

Meanwhile, Oceane decided she had to follow them, so she went to see a mermaid witch who gave her a potion that would enable her to become human. She drinks it and rises to the surface. Oceane goes to the island and joins the others, fighting vampires.
Helene : We're glad to see you, Oceane.
Lily : Help us get rid of them.
Oceane : Ok. FROTH SPHERE!

Meanwhile, Marc tries to steal the keys but gets caught.
Marc : Now we're both in the dungeon.
Mia : You couldn't beat him?
Marc: No, he’s too strong.

Chapter 8: Final battle.

Mya : Finally, we're in the castle... and I'm exhausted!
Helene : Me too...
Lily : We've fought I-don't-know-how-many vampires... I don't want to see any of them again!
Oceane: Just one more, Lily.
Mya : Derrick. We will beat you!!!
All Party : YES!!!
They searched the castle, but all they found were vampires they had to beat.
Lily : Even their minds are empty. No matter how hard I probe, I can't find anything interesting.
Mya : Yet... Mia must be in the dungeon?
Oceane : Then it's time to go here!
They go to the dungeon.
Mya : Mia? Are you here?
Mia : Get us out of here!
Oceane : ‘Us’?
Mya passes through the grid and sees Mia.
Mya : I'm so glad to see you again! But... he's a vampire!!!
Mia : No, he's an ally!
Marc : It's true. I should have realized it, but... my father has done horrible things and I'm going to beat him.
Mya : In that case...
Mya goes back through the grid with Mia and Marc.
Lily : Now we have to find Derrick!
Mia : Uh…
Lily : That's right. I'm Lily.
Helene : I'm Helene.
Oceane : My name is Oceane.
Mia : Nice to meet you all.
Derrick appears!
Derrick : You're all going to die! ...Except you, my son.
Marc : No! If they die, I'll die with her!
Derrick : If that's what you want.
The final battle begins!
Mia : ICE MISSILE!
Helene : FLARE!
Marc : FLARE WALL!
Lily : RAY!
Oceane : ICE HORN!
Mya : GRAND GAIA!
Derrick : AH! You won't get me like this! I'm invincible!
Marc : That's true. Unless you stick something sharp in his heart...
Mya : Something sharp? Like that!
Lily: Yes, your sword!
Helene : We'll paralyze him. You can use it for the final blow!
Mya : All right.
Mia, Helene, Oceane, Lily and Marc sent their most powerful Psynergies at Derrick. He didn't have time to react as Mya finished him off with her blade.
Lily : AH, HE'S DEAD! IT'S GREAT!
Helene : Yes, it's great!
Mia : Now we can go home!
A Gate appears.
Mya : Helene, Oceane... I didn't tell you, but...
Oceane : Are you from the Other World?
Mya : Yes.
Helene : ... Goodbye.
Oceane : Good... bye.
Marc and Lily (with tears in their eyes) : Yes, goodbye!
Mya : Do know… that we might see each other again, you never know!
Mya and Mia jump into the Gate.

Epilogue.

They reappear in Vale.
Ivan (seeing them) : MIA! I'm glad to see you alive!
He sends a telepathic message to the others, who arrive running.
The others : We're glad you're back!!!!
Mia : T-Thanks.
Isaac : But what happened? Tell us.
Mya tells them everything.

Afterword

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